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The Limericks of a Disgruntled Aspie

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Published: Oct 11, 2014

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1.)Experiences with neurotypicals left a bad taste
they always judged her posthaste
Loser and geek
psychopath and freak
just because she couldn't look them in the face.

2.) Once there was an Aspergian youth
whom everyone thought was quite uncouth
blunt and 'crass'
they thought him an ass
just because he told them the truth.

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I wanted to play with a new form of poetry, and I've always been fond of limericks. These are more serious than funny, but I needed to let off some steam and raise awareness, so...

I may add more to this list in the future.

Questions:
1.) Any suggestions on how to improve structure?
2.) Flow?
3.) Rhyme?

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